Kourtney Cole
I talked to Kourtney yesterday, and learned a little bit about her. When we were talking she mentioned she had a twin. I asked her if she was a fraternal or identical twin, but she was unsure because she had never been tested to see. Kourtney also has two cute dogs which she loves. One dog is a Yellow Lab Retriever named buddy, and a Yellow Lab named Manny. Kourtney is the middle child in her family. She has one older sister, and one younger sister. She is the younger twin. She went to Harding middle school, but now goes to Kennedy High School. She is in Japanese and Intro To Media And Journalism. She is very enjoyable to talk to and I hope to learn more about her later.
I enjoyed reading this but I'd like elaboration. I want to see more about the twin part. I noticed a few grammatical errors as well. Overall I liked the information you gave!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this but I wish i could of got to know her more in this paper.
ReplyDeleteI found it interesting being able to go back and read the profile about me. I like how you wrote it and everything you included is accurate! Nice job!
ReplyDeleteGreat job on this profile! The only thing I'd recommend is to expand a bit more on the story. What you've got so far is well done. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this and liked how it felt like you were simply talking to the audience. There are some grammatical errors that need to be fixed, but not too many. I enjoyed how you addressed many topics about Kourtney, and I found the one about if she is fraternal or identical very interesting.
ReplyDeleteIt didn't really feel like I could see her as a person very much in this article. And yes there were a few grammar issues as well. Keep working on it! Good job!
ReplyDeletegood article but it seemed a little jumpy. try to focus on one or two topics.
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